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Bluntsmokken
BluntsmokkenLv138mth
2024-09-08 01:58

It’s not bad but it’s just not my cup of coffee. I hate main characters being pushed around and being a doormat, I already do that irl I don’t need a fantasy that does the same. Also I hate know-it-all characters that aren’t on the same side of the MC so yeah, I ain’t reading any further. If you like main characters that are competent and is in control of their lives then you’re gonna hate this, like what’s the point of making him a reincarnated person who knows the story if he’s gonna be forced into the main storyline anyways.

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haytham_
haytham_Author

Thanks for the feedback! That's just the first arc. He's not dumb enough to kill himself over pride. When you're strong, you can be proud. But pride without strength is pointless

FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

How long will it continue like this. I've read a bit and he seems pretty pathetic so far. It kills my excitement for the novel.

haytham_:Thanks for the feedback! That's just the first arc. He's not dumb enough to kill himself over pride. When you're strong, you can be proud. But pride without strength is pointless
haytham_
haytham_Author

At the end of arc 1 and the start of Arc 2(Snow Village Mission),

FallenAngeI:How long will it continue like this. I've read a bit and he seems pretty pathetic so far. It kills my excitement for the novel.
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

Is that released already or not? If not approximately how many chapters?

haytham_:At the end of arc 1 and the start of Arc 2(Snow Village Mission),
haytham_
haytham_Author

We finished the first arc.

FallenAngeI:Is that released already or not? If not approximately how many chapters?
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15

Is the aunt a heroine and future harem member?

haytham_:Thanks for the feedback! That's just the first arc. He's not dumb enough to kill himself over pride. When you're strong, you can be proud. But pride without strength is pointless
haytham_
haytham_Author

yes

Ayce_o_Spade:Is the aunt a heroine and future harem member?
haytham_
haytham_Author

Yes, all of them are verging.

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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

Bro, you gotta stop pandering to these weirdos. Stop letting these “men” edge to this shit bro. You actually answered a person that calls women “leftovers”? Are you a human? Even an AI would respond better than you did

haytham_:Yes, all of them are verging.
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

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haytham_
haytham_Author

To tell you the truth, i only read the first few sentences and didn't see that until you told me, and then noticed that even my replay has mistake 😂😂, i need to be more aware of these things, thanks for telling me.

DaoistArbore:Bro, you gotta stop pandering to these weirdos. Stop letting these “men” edge to this shit bro. You actually answered a person that calls women “leftovers”? Are you a human? Even an AI would respond better than you did
Doldman116
Doldman116Lv4

Lol when I see your reply to his comment, I thought why you are commenting to that weird question. Now I got it, you didn't read it properly Hahaha.. Just I am reading Apothesis manhua, reached to God Domain arc and please don't make any heroines like in this story except them that whole story is freaking good and even you will like the side characters.

haytham_:To tell you the truth, i only read the first few sentences and didn't see that until you told me, and then noticed that even my replay has mistake 😂😂, i need to be more aware of these things, thanks for telling me.
Doldman116
Doldman116Lv4

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Phaeron
PhaeronLv3

bro the convo here, btw how many chapters are you planning

haytham_:To tell you the truth, i only read the first few sentences and didn't see that until you told me, and then noticed that even my replay has mistake 😂😂, i need to be more aware of these things, thanks for telling me.
DingoDog
DingoDogLv1

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Victor_Walker_9903
Victor_Walker_9903Lv3

which chapter is the end of first arc??

haytham_:Thanks for the feedback! That's just the first arc. He's not dumb enough to kill himself over pride. When you're strong, you can be proud. But pride without strength is pointless
Samie_Deos
Samie_DeosLv3

true 🤝

haytham_:Thanks for the feedback! That's just the first arc. He's not dumb enough to kill himself over pride. When you're strong, you can be proud. But pride without strength is pointless
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