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2024-09-22 23:23

Really great till author won’t stop trying to make the MC as nurfed as possible so that he can seem like an underdog for overcoming this “weakness” of his. Oh and the “weakness” of his is that he has a full divinity of creativity so he has to use 10x as much divine power for literally anything he does even if it involves creativity.(oh he also never boosts his creativity or anyone else’s with his divinity) Also everyone else with just elemental divinity’s that aren’t a full concept can get as much divine points as him somehow from having a country pray once a week but the MC has his whole country of mages praying 6 times a day on average and somehow those are even in scaling to the author and they are an even match… like what? This was even after the author at the beginning of the test for the young gods had the MC compare what level most other gods would get to, to what level he would get to with being prayed to a bunch of times a day when the other gods usually only get prayers one or twice a week and he stated that they would probably only raise two ranks through the WHOLE test but HALFWAY through a god of fear appears and is already rank 5, like what????? If your gonna change the scaling change it, just don’t leave it and change it half way through and expect people to keep reading your novel when you keep changing how everything works and giving no explanation or reasoning. Author, your ruining your own story with the scaling of power, maybe right it down on an extra paper so you remember what you actually did so you don’t change how the scaling works mid novel✍️

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