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Omes_7736Lv15mth
2024-11-10 14:09

this fic started off strong but then the mc becomes super indecisive allowing betrayals against him not punishing the perpetrators and continually allowing enemies to get the better of him. even though he supposedly has high intelligence and powers.and the way he just milks character to death that he should of killed off already for drawn out boring drama. got soo annoying that i had to drop the story.

The Gamer Files: The 100's Gamer.

God_Of_DepravityX
3.7
98 Chs

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Lucifer_Glass
Lucifer_GlassLv5

I think that's a plot device that the author's doing on purpose because after each betrayal or inconvenience, his leadership style is changing. Somewhere around chapter seventy (maybe a little before), he really becomes fed up with it, and it shows a good growth in his leadership style.

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Prince_Wilson_4908
Prince_Wilson_4908Lv3

Not worth it because the world the mc lives in that can be the end of his life if this continues

Lucifer_Glass:I think that's a plot device that the author's doing on purpose because after each betrayal or inconvenience, his leadership style is changing. Somewhere around chapter seventy (maybe a little before), he really becomes fed up with it, and it shows a good growth in his leadership style.
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The idea is great. The setting is novel enough to catch anyone's eye. The writing is also good. Sadly, that's all this fic has in terms of hooks. It's worth a try, but be warned that the MC is a teenager given power. He's edge given form and all good things that happen in the story are because of him. Of course, any time something bad happens has nothing to do with the MC and the Teen Chad McEdge is always there to sav- observe, he won't save, cause morals are for those of lesser edge. He also starts liking a girl, but obiously won't love. Love is not for Chad MC's.

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