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2024-08-16 19:59

you are "just a student"? what a clickbait. you are the " student with system-emon"! dont act you are in disadvantaged

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While the concept of the story is nice, i feel like the use of the system alongside the transported MC with knowledge of Detective Conan is lacking. I do enjoy that he solves the cases quick since he is knows the plot and that he has prevented some cases from happening, i feel like the combination of the system and the MC knowing of the story just fights against each other. If the MC didn't know of DC's plot while still having the system, then it could have made the story much better as havng the system reward the MC from solving cases would have pushed the main character to actually try to solve them. Even if the MC received rewards that further made him an incredible detective with supernatural abilities, it would have still been rewarding since he did work for it in the early chapters. If you still decided to have the MC know of the anime's plot while having the system, then you could have just had him gain rewards by solving cases instead of just using actual money which just seemed to be much more easier. Also i wish that we get to see more of the MC outside of a case like how he lives his life, attends school and such. Sure their were cases early on and even in the latest chapters that i am reading but its still not enough. It feels like without a case, the MC is no one. He doesn't even have anything worth pursuing outside of cases such as maybe finding some romance with Ran or Sonoko or just anyone at all. He has very little character interactions outside a case. Heck, it sometimes feel's like you forget that he is still a student.

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