Alyss_UlanLv42mth

2024-10-07 01:07

I like the feel of this story but, the author over-explains thing's too much. It's like I'm reading a paragraph back to back most chapters about the same thing but in different wording. Now that wouldn't be so bad if it happened like in very few chapters, but I see it in almost all of them. The pacing for the story goes real fast at times then drags on the rest. I love apocalypse stories the most, they are one of my favorite genre's. This story could hit even more if it kept with a steadier pace and to leave some things a little unspoken for the readers to come to the conclusion of things on their own. World Background is there, won't give any spoilers about it. Character Designs, I will say are lost on me. That could just be me though forgetting cause I'm currently reading around 15~20 novels, so it's hard to remember what the character's features are. Writing quality is good other than the over-explaining. Updating stability is good at the time I'm reviewing it. Story development is a little on the slow side. You still see it happening just not at a jogging pace more like a walk. Which is good for some stories if they're longer novels; not short stories though. ( On that note I will say I have no idea how long this novel will be! Take that as you will.)

Transmigrated into Another Apocalyptic World (BL)

Ann_Lucy_4506

4.3

174 Chs