The concept is good but the writing is so trash

the story is pretty good, but the writing I really bad. still readable

Uzumaki: I Can't Comprehend Anything This story needs someone to proof read or GPT

This story is fanfic of a fanfic, weak. I read a similar plot where Mc ask for mass shadow clone and shadow explosion; using gorilla tactic, hit and run, and night harrasment tactic.

why the heck Chinese people are obsessed with child soldiers. This could have been entertaining if not for child soldiers and child mc

Overall, a good story which can be great. Just the author needs to upgrade the writing skills & for that 1 star is cut-off. All The Best.

I hate chinese novel and fanfiction. webnovel is full of this garbage

Good try but the translation is very poor the story is mildly interesting I doubt the translator will go back and fix any of the many errors In the spelling

impossible to read without getting a headache.... It's legible, but almost every paragraph is messed up. It's obviously translated quite poorly.

Was a cool premise at first but it just turns into kingdombuilding shit