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2024-07-30 23:22

This is mainely just dry to read and doesn’t give a lot of context to the story and background history to things, then there’s the fact that there is stuff that just make zero sense and have no possibility In happening, there’s parts that just gloss over events that happen two seconds prior and then act like nothing happened. All in all I can’t see this successful as it is and it may need a rewrite and have things actually thought out and planned in a way that works and makes sense, this could be a great story but as it is now just ain’t it.

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