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Troy34
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2024-07-29 22:53

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book

Dimensional Kaguya Ōtsutsuki

Dao_Of_Heaven
4.3
501 Chs

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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

OK WAS KAGUYA EVIL?-NO, SHE IS A CLONE OF THANOS THE MAD TITAN-trying to stop the celestial from being born..KAGUYA WAS TRYING TO STOP OTSUTSUKI god clan,, NARUTO SEAL THE WOMEN THAT WANT TO STOP THAT CLAN but their god clan on the loose..DID NARUTO SAVE THE WORLD OR HE WAS USED BY THE TOADS..NARUTO ANIME HATES WOMEN ..SO THANK YOU FOR THIS NOVEL ABOUT KAGUYA.

4mth

Invoke_Static
Invoke_StaticLv12

The real problem is that the author didn't want to write anything new. This is just Naruto with a weak OC in it. Nothing changes, and something convenient always happens, so the story of Naruto never changes. Kaguya, who is born with a sage body, constantly has low amounts of chakra. Let that sink in. Not to mention, even when she gets the Tensigan, she still can't beat a normal Kage-level ninja...

3mth
MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

OK OTSUTSUKI CLAN ARE EVIL AND THEY VIEW EVERYONE AS BUGS..BUT KAGUYA WAS A KIND PERSON,, HER 2 DUMB SONS NEVER ASKED HER WHY..CMON WENT KAGUYA FIGHT SHE WAS KIND...THE SAGE AND NARUTO ARE FOOLS PLAYED BY THOSE TOADS THEY ARE EVIL LIERS ..THE WORLD WAS AT PEACE WITH KAGUYA BUT WITH THE KAGE THEIR WORLD WAR..CMON THANOS WAS RIGHT AND THE AVENGER WRONG..

3mth
Sample_Text_2389
Sample_Text_2389Lv2

This is a fun story, however the tags are highly misleading. I originally started reading it because of the Yuri tag and that was a mistake, because this is 100 percent not a Yuri story. None of the female characters are even remotely interested in the MC while she has a female body. In fact they behave as if the mere possibility of a romantic relationship between women is ridiculous. And so far the main goal of Kaguya appears to be... Becoming male.

3mth
Kell_Kewyo
Kell_KewyoLv1

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DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv11

Reveal spoiler

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_Miyasaka
_MiyasakaLv14

Reveal spoiler

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lolipopp69
lolipopp69Lv4

good story but not my type‚ it's hard to read a stupid mc...but still goodluck author

3mth
Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101Lv6

Enjoying reading it. ......................................................................................................................................

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