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2024-11-01 15:25

Слишком много слов связанных со льдом. Книга вроде-бы про покемонов, но больше описания гардероба, и внешность других девушек . Первый бой за значок, ожидал лучшее описание чем в предыдущих сражениях , но тут выдуманые движения покемонов, из-за которых трудно представить ход боя . К примеру зефир, я конечного не специалист по фселенной покемон , но уверен что покемон не может совмещать две атаки, какой урон она нанесёт? Супер эффективно от стальных крыльев или урон от огня? Может тогда придумаешь ход уничтожающий мир и возраждающий его?! Почему бы и нет... Если честно произведение не назовешь плохим, просто желание почить про покемонов было а не это. Момент перед боем показался странным, ходить полуголой и желать чтобы люди не пялились .

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