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Wounded_Sloth
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2024-07-27 07:11

The author here, this is my first work and I would love to hear your reviews and comments about it. I've always been a big fan of football and I just thought why not write a novel about it[img=recommend]

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roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

MC could be a little more talented he doesn't seem to be that talented I don't see how he can become one of the greatest football players we say that effort is very important it's important but talent is equally important too What are your thoughts?

Prodigy532
Prodigy532Lv5

could please stop referring to football as soccer. that's blasphemy 😤. it was long known as football before you Americans tried to change the name.

Wounded_Sloth
Wounded_SlothAuthor

You're right sorry about that 😂

Prodigy532:could please stop referring to football as soccer. that's blasphemy 😤. it was long known as football before you Americans tried to change the name.
Wounded_Sloth
Wounded_SlothAuthor

Yeah, Iv'vegot something planned out for that. It's not something drastic. Anticipate[img=proud]

roubando_universo:MC could be a little more talented he doesn't seem to be that talented I don't see how he can become one of the greatest football players we say that effort is very important it's important but talent is equally important too What are your thoughts?
Prodigy532
Prodigy532Lv5

if possible please make that correction

Wounded_Sloth
Wounded_SlothAuthor

Sure[img=angry]

Prodigy532:if possible please make that correction
roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

So I don't understand why Mia is worried about the friendship between the two since he doesn't have any friendship with Alex

roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

MC Contactor Alex Williams never talks about anything, the two of the don't have any friendship, we see that he has a very strong friendship with Mia

roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

At no point did I see the MC contact Alex, the two are just rivals, the only feeling the MC gives to Alex is just as a rival

roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

just one doubt

Wounded_Sloth
Wounded_SlothAuthor

They became a bit close due to their time together at united. Hmmm, I should have added that. Thanks[img=Sigh]

roubando_universo:So I don't understand why Mia is worried about the friendship between the two since he doesn't have any friendship with Alex
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