The story has potential and it's pretty good with the use of some abilities, Just in my personal opinion, mc has too much power from the start. For example, I like the skill he chose for the first time use of that golden energy but he uses of those abilities are too diverse and advanced without any training and familiarity. Take the illusion manipulation ability for example, the way he used it is something I would expect from Marlin or other pro illusion users. He is way too good at them in very little time. Otherwise it's a good fanfiction.👍👍❤️😇
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Hmm, I guess I glossed over this. When he gains a skill, he gains what I like to call the muscle memory to use it. In Tensura, Rimiru gets the skills and instinctively know how to use it as a part of his body like gluttony. Great sage is his assist skill and can make controlling his skills easier and increase his control over them. What they might train in Tensura is the Arts that they use. So when Yuhao gains Thread manipulation, he can already use it skillfully, what he can do in the future is increase his control so that he can even touch the threads of fate if he wanted. I guess I will make a training arc for him, but that is after world hopping. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
You're welcome, and keep up the good work 👍
