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TypicalOtaku4235
TypicalOtaku4235Lv19mth
2024-07-26 16:59

I really liked the idea, but for me personally the writing is poor and there are many shortcomings.Somehow the dialogues are weak and the way you insert characters looks terrible. But I believe in you and I wish you to improve yourself.

The Boys meets unexpected visitors from another universe.

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Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

He complains about the 7 but starts killing people for his own convenience just like them. He basically killed a greater evil to become a lesser evil.

9mth
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Greed_Anthem
Greed_AnthemLv12

the story is fun even with bad grammar the most problematic thing is that it's a bit all over the place other than that pretty good read just because most of the boys fanfics are worse.

9mth

novelguru143
novelguru143Lv14

good concept but falls during execution . The dialogue is nonsensical , but keep trying best of luck author .

9mth
Mazino_Carlodaze
Mazino_CarlodazeLv4

it's nice but not bad either. keep trying though.

9mth
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