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DaoistCkdsB0
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2024-09-15 17:29

translation is okay with a few incorrect names here and there. the story is bland and infuriating with a climax that could be seen from a mile away. the characters make no sense whatsoever. the whole story has two brain cells with the side characters sharing one and the main character staking his claim on the other. world background is excessively and unrealistically dark which becomes a bit off putting, especially with the characters.

After breaking up, my ex asked me to win her back

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Viadhivan_Ranata
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No Reviews yet? Let me fix that by being the first to give you all five stars in all categories 😆📖🍻

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PcaNovels
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I'll be honest here, i feel this story would have gone better as one of those more common lose you and regret latter novels. I stopped at chapter thirty or so. First, the system was great but the MC deceiving one girl so he can pay back what he owes to another is kinda weird and unappealing. This kind of conspiracy of love and betrayal within young love circles in an urban world setting is honestly bland and I don't know about others but i find it uninteresting. Perhaps it would have gone better with fantasy elements. I mean, I'm that kinda reader so ..... The MC's bland personality with no clear goals doesn't make it any better. World background gets a five star. I'll add a five for update stability as well. three for character design. five for translation quality and two for story development. Apparently, this adds up to a four star but i honestly don't feel the book is worth that much so since i never experienced update stability, I'll bring it back to three stars and a 3.6 should do it.

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Mikoro_kun
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very interesting, MC is just what i need

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Slothfu1
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Pass not worth the brain power or time to read dog licking type mc bland world and typical nonsense conflicts has an ability to read minds bur doesn't use it when he should and act like a robot boring emo gloomy

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Ali_Imran_8572
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The MC is just a dog. The titles and tags are totally unrelating. No world building. The characters feel empty. The story is no better. The translation/ writing is the only good thing abt this.

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