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2024-11-22 09:46

Excelente história, com boas desenvolturas, mas demora um pouco para engrenar. Narração interessante e com boa abordagem dos personagens. As vezes pode ser um pouco repetitivo as falas, mas explicam bem e descrevem os ambientes.

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