With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.
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Thank you for the review. I will go back over the beginning ones. After finishing this volume, I am close to its ending. I have already written the outline for part of the second volume, so I will have some spare time to fix anything that I find wrong. Thank you again for the review.
No problem author if you set up a patreon or subscribestar I’d subscribe. Just keep giving us that sweet sweet spice.
I do this as a hobby and don't want to make it about money for now, but maybe in the future, when I feel that my work is worth money. But don't worry, I love writing this story, so I will keep it going for a long time.
Thank you this book has kinks in it you don’t see unless you got to Archive of our own
I aim to please as much as I can.
If I could heart the response I would. I appreciate that passion in your hobbie.
I commented on your other post; tell me if it shows up. I also commented on the character's post. For some odd reason, my comments aren't being posted for others to see, but it shows that they're posted on my end.
