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2024-10-09 01:55

The plot seems interesting and it would be even better if sight adjustments were made. Overall I believe the story has potential. Although the Mc might need a bit work.

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I’ve hit the milestone of 100 chapters, and I pretty much have a handle on the story now. And so, I’ve compiled a set of questions that some people might have regarding the book. —Why does it keep changing POVs? In my opinion, I believe this allows me to flush out the personalities of other characters and expand on the world more naturally and also set up future events. The MC doesn’t know a lot about the world, he’s just a pawn to a bigger game. Trying to introduce it in his eyes would cripple the pace of the worldbuilding. To those who find this annoying. You have my apologies. —What is the core theme of the story? When starting out to this book I wanted it to be something lighthearted, like a comedy, as some of you can tell by the humor I put in some chapters. However, I have this habit of complicating things for myself. So I can say that it’s a mixture of heavy and lighthearted moments. Even though this wasn't what I wanted for the story, I am satisfied with what I’ve written thus far —Who is best girl? I can’t say. The story is teeming with great female characters that it would be a crime to just pick one. I’ll just leave that to reader’s personal preference. —Will there be a harem? Absolutely not! I never liked the genre, so I don’t think I’ll be including it any time soon. The MC might be surrounded by a lot of girls but that doesn't mean he's going to have a harem. However that isn’t to say there won’t be any romance, there will be but it’ll be a slow burn, a very, very slow burn. —How many volumes do you plan to have? Can’t say, but I at least want to end the story at around 500-600 chapters or so. Depends on the situation really. If there are any more questions. I'll be happy to answer them as best as I can without spoilers Thanks for reading!

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