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R00t
R00tLv112mth
2024-09-01 07:25

Very good story so far, great world building and although at first I was off put by the mc not personally joining in the fights, I came to like the concept.

Starting With Batman

One_sword
4.4
288 Chs

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One_sword
One_swordAuthor

I partially disagree with your review, I don’t see any world building and I have translated up to chapter 101 Or maybe my definition of world building is a bit rigid, I’m not sure if plot development counts as world building (I tend to add that in a separate category) Btw (this shit has mad plot) thums up to the author👍🫡 There is character development though, 🤔 although the character being developed is not the MC. A bit Ironic. I like the story though, it’s an enjoyable read and honestly quite fun to translate Although some chaps makes me want to chop of the authors hands so he can no longer cook, others makes me want to build him a brand new Kitchen lol Most chaps give me the latter feeling I’m thinking of writing my official review once the book reaches 100 chaps As of now it’s like a 4.2/5 - thanks for the review And I hope you continue to enjoy the story. 😘 you lovable sexy creature✌️

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ZonicZ
ZonicZLv6

why you no longer uploading for your fics?

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One_sword
One_swordAuthor

What do you mean SWB upload daily

ZonicZ:why you no longer uploading for your fics?
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One_sword
One_swordAuthor

wait no... I feel like u talking to R00T lol, ima stay out of this

One_sword:What do you mean SWB upload daily
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One_sword
One_swordAuthor

Where do I start? First off, kudos to the author! He did an amazing job keeping the story interesting and fresh. Normally, when you hear "Marvel or DC fanfic," you think of the Marvel Universe or the DC Universe—No. The author took a whole different approach, and not to spoil it for potential readers, I'll simply say I quite like it. Now to the review: Writing Quality: This one is entirely on me, so I do have a bit of bias in saying the quality is great. However, I can't deny there are many issues, especially in the beginning chapters when I was still undecided on whether to remove all the Chinese elements. They're mostly gone now, but all that's left is for me to contemplate which idioms to keep and which to scrap. So, 4 stars. Uploading Stability: Readers who joined during September 15-21 will probably think this deserves 0 stars, lol. But for everyone else who has been around long enough, I'm sure they won't fault me for giving myself a 5-star rating. Story Development: 5 stars. Hell yeah! This is the reason the story is so fun to translate. There are so many twists and turns that always manage to excite me. The plot is amazing, and I have zero complaints. Good job, author! Character Design: Oooh, this is a tricky one. You see, the main character is Charlie, and he's... well, a typical, standard character. Nothing unique. No particular emotional turmoil. No... nothing. I feel like if he were replaced with any random passerby, the story wouldn't change much. This is where I think the author missed the mark. However, on the other hand, I feel like this might have been done deliberately. The story seems to focus more on the characters Charlie controls rather than Charlie himself. Unfortunately, the characters are pre-designed—they have a whole cinematic universe just for them, so there's not much originality there. The only saving grace is the side characters. They have their own stories, their own feelings, and the way the author portrays them honestly works wonders. I low-key cried at the end of Ivan's tale. Still, I have to give this 2 stars. World Background: Ehh... by Chapter 100, we've only seen one city and a few key locations, so there's not much in terms of world-building. In fact, it's kind of bland. 1 star. If you ask me to picture the world, all I can say is "Riverton." Now, this is actually fine—there are many interesting works of fiction that take place in just one city. These aren't web novels but actual books I've read, like A List of Cages by Robin Roe, After the Shot Drops by Randy Ribay, and My Sister Rosa by Justine Larbalestier. However, the issue here is that those books have vivid descriptions, not just of the characters but also of the buildings, the streets, the cracks in the pavement, the smell of smog in the air, and the distant sirens. Unfortunately, this story lacks that level of detail, so 1 star. --- Sooooo, I did the math and... damn, 3.4. That's kinda low. I didn't expect that, especially since I really like this fic. Welp... boo-hoo. - Sword out

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ComradeAlexy
ComradeAlexyLv1

Bro adapted absolutely all Chinese names and titles for us, removed Chinese aphorisms and sayings, destroyed racism. He is a hero and deserves attention

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LEGENDARYDRAGON
LEGENDARYDRAGONLv1

I always wanted someone to translate this fic and it is by far one of the best translated fits I have read since awhile it makes a lot of fun to read because the translation is so good.

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tedmosby2016
tedmosby2016Lv14

Don't waste your time. Good translation, promising set up but awful execution. Worst of all it is written by a h *rny kid. Gets way worse later on. Super cringe. it is either a prepubescent brat or a very suspicious adult who should be added to the FBI watchlist.. He is too h *rny to walk freely in public, even the men aren't safe

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Chibaku_Monster
Chibaku_MonsterLv11

it's good you've picked it up, haven't found time to translate this. now I don't have to bother finishing it 😆

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Reaper_512
Reaper_512Lv4

A good story and great translation. Would recommend reading.

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LazyReaderAlways
LazyReaderAlwaysLv4

This is absolute peak. You don’t know what you’re missing out on. I pity the fools who skip this. Thank you translator and editor. Love you man.

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Raiinn
RaiinnLv3

Thanks for translating this story author, i really love this story, hope u can keep translating it!.........................................

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Exi_Nexi
Exi_NexiLv4

This is one amazing story, definitely recommend. If the author didn’t say it is a translation, I don’t think I would have been able to tell. This is in part because the author is doing an amazing job translating the story, but also in major part because the author changed the names to English names making the entire story easier to read and follow along.

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