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Jin_Shin_5845
Jin_Shin_5845Lv46mth
2024-07-18 07:32

everything you do bro it's just it's good and I like this and I hope it's just more than a one shot hope you continue writing things like this I love all of them from the rap King to the one that you're not one you're doing the other football writing all of them is just amazing

Luka Zoric

AmSincere
4.8
64 Chs

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sword_saint838
sword_saint838Lv2

this story here is also about football, very interesting, her name is Pitch Perfect

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Bright_Okyere_3120
Bright_Okyere_3120Lv13

I really like this story. Keep up with it +(Convict to the king ) & I hope u won’t drop it like other authors :)

6mth

roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

acho que o mc tem tanto talento de brasileiros ele deveria ser o brasileiro ou o pai dele ser brasileiro para mim seria mais interessante que ele tem um talento de Neymar Ronaldinho e outros jogadores brasileiros

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evillaughter
evillaughterLv4

looks promising hope you don't drop this like your other novel best of luck

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roubando_universo
roubando_universoLv11

I came to withdraw my critical criticisms the mc he didn't go to Portugal but the mc doesn't need to win everything at the beginning he can go through some problems and mature I think it's better but I'm not a writer you know my opinion I love it so that's it

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RainSennin
RainSenninLv4

It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by AI (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how AI usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me) Honestly, as far as AI stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.

5mth
Lollipop_gun11
Lollipop_gun11Lv12

Once you see β€œby AmSincere” put it straight in your library because he always cooks ngl Honestly a Fantastic story love how we are seeing his journey

6mth
Thiago_Ferreira_6770
Thiago_Ferreira_6770Lv1

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Taiel_Rodriguez
Taiel_RodriguezLv4

gran historia lastima que tarda en actualizar los capitulos

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Theboxer
TheboxerLv11

Keep it up excellent novel πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯ πŸ‘ πŸ”₯

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