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Tr0uble_Maker
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2024-10-12 00:58

This story hasn't much chapters yet, but even with the current available ones are much fun with 1 or even 2 chapters per day, there isn't much typing mistakes that's if there's, the background seems fine with a new idea. I hope author won't stop

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I rate my book a solid five stars and I'll tell you why. Don't worry, I actually do have an objective reason why. I wrote this book because I was tired of reading urban fantasy wealth building books with no substance and wanted to write one that won't be so painful to read. Most of those books suffer from what I like to call the “deliberate stupidity syndrome” whereby the MC could've gotten a hundred billion dollars by chapter 30 and shown everybody how great he is but the author keeps him dumb just so the story can continue. Any reasonably smart person would have exploited those systems and become billionaires by day 2 or one week at most. I didn't want something like that, so I created a system with a natural limit. Nico (my MC) can't just print money out of nowhere. He has to actually plan and work for it. With no infinite money glitch, we get to see his hard work and cheer for him on the way. The second thing I wanted to curb was “face slapping.” If the wealth building book doesn't have a dumb MC with the deliberate stupidity syndrome, the book will be rife with useless face slapping. These books have no actual plot and use face slapping to pad the stories. I wanted to write an urban wealth building book where the story has an actual plot and goal and doesn't need to rely on face slapping to be good. I hope these points convince you to read my book. I will appreciate it if you read all the free chapters before deciding to drop. Thank you in advance. If you have any questions, you can ask here.

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