I've read 32 chapters so far and I'm very tired... The heavily usage of gpt in the chapter makes is very boring and tired to read... The aí just explain the same thing over and over for 5 paragraphs... The novel is promising, I'm probably gonna try to read the raw

Ngl. This story is so well thought out, I'm surprised this hasn't gone popular yet. Especially the author opened a whole new world where the 1st hokage alive and it can seamlessly connect to naruto world to this. This fic is now my canon well except the mc. Only the world bg😆

what a freakin bait and switch.. this is no transmigration. He just has memories of another world but he is not from the modern world. I hate tricky, lying, Manipulative authors.

Surprisingly refreshing! well written and a good way to put forward the plot. Not rushed. Good stuff. There aren't a lot of chapters but you guys should take a look at it!

this had a lot of potential but ultimately the MC has minimal changes to the plot, it's like the author is afraid of properly making any good changes, the distribution of the 9 tailed beast(8 since shukaku was with land of wind) was probably the dumbest move and the author also idk why agrees to it, and the MC in itself is a very bland character and for me honestly seems like a spineless guy, these are the main reasons this story even with good quality grammer n all is still not that popular

decent

It's easier to get bad reviews or comments than a good one when everything is good, When I mean good, it's about being good not extraordinarily well written. So yeah, your ff feels good to read for a hundred chapters. And that my friend is an achievement rarely seen on Webnovel nowadays. Keep up the good work !

Good so far

Well, so far the story is going well. I really liked how it's been progressing, although I find the protagonist a bit weak. But other than that, I really enjoyed it!

isn't this the kazutora one in mtl. what will be the difference.