well I don't care if it is reuploaded in the end it is an mtl there were already several that uploaded it and in the end they left it, we will see how this one goes

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It's a good story. For me the point of trading mostly on your own without relying much on the system is something that is well done in my opinion. As for the development of the story and characters, it is well carried out. Thanks for bringing the fic even though you're not the original author. Good luck and I hope you keep up the good work.

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hasta ahora es muy interesante, espero que siga así y continúe subiendo capítulos. Contiene elementos que se usan mucho en los fanfic chinos, pero este parece haberse hecho bien, el personaje no parece tener problemas mentales, como en otros fanfic tipo wuxia con jóvenes maestos.

It is good until now but I might change review later. I have read similar concept in a chinese novel but your execution looks better.