is this the rewrite or continue of story?
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LIKEDo i need to know about Warhammer lore? Cz I'm not familiar with it. Also i believe you should have some work with the characters interaction and relationship development. Ngl due to your old fics that aspect is not that good. Oh, and the romances too
Daoist_KittyKat:New story with similar-ish setting and that's all the similarity. totally disconnected to the previous fic
no need Warhammer Verse knowledge. what I used are pretty much layman stuff. as for relationships, I try. should be better and I also try not to rush too fast this time.
LunaKindred:Do i need to know about Warhammer lore? Cz I'm not familiar with it. Also i believe you should have some work with the characters interaction and relationship development. Ngl due to your old fics that aspect is not that good. Oh, and the romances too