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2024-07-31 00:26

Shameless author Review here, Do read the novel and have fun. Let me know if you feel any improvement is needed in the story, I will be happy to accomodate and consider it.

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I haven't read the novel yet but it looks pretty interesting. Though I did have a question, why have you made the and the other male character's illustration having shaved their beards. Wouldn't it be made more historically accurate to depict them with beards or is it just an aesthetic choice ?

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The AI makes bearded characters look too old.

Knighthawk213:I haven't read the novel yet but it looks pretty interesting. Though I did have a question, why have you made the and the other male character's illustration having shaved their beards. Wouldn't it be made more historically accurate to depict them with beards or is it just an aesthetic choice ?
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