Great story, great writing, and great character development so far. I was only bothered by the fact that the protagonist emphasizes almost all the time how his friends are his 'pawns' and that he's just manipulating them all the time, but this seems to be improving as the MC becomes more attached. I can't wait for the future of this story! I'd really love to see how the MC becomes better with each chapter. I hope you, Mr. Author, don't feel pressured by the weird readers who can't bear to read the MC caring about the people around him. Keep up the good work!
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