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Crimson_Star96
Crimson_Star96Lv29mth
2024-08-01 18:40

I like everything in this fanfic, except for the pairing, but this is the author's work and it is up to the author to decide. I am very happy with the Stark family tree, since they are my favorite house in Martin's universe, and the other Valyrian house, since I do not like the Targaryens very much. I also really like that you support the work with images, I am also happy with the theme and clothing of the assassins. The only negative is the fights between people, I ask you to improve the writing and the fact that despite all the difficult and harsh training, the main character barely defeated some thenn, who did not have powerful training and the fact that he received injuries from Damon. Please do not look at the haters, when you like something, rarely does anyone write about it, thinking that it is obvious and they read it silently, and when you don't like something, it is much easier and more pleasant to write a review. Please continue.

Valhalla in HOTD

Brogdawg32
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54 Chs

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ShadowFlamePhoenix
ShadowFlamePhoenixLv14

Did you mean ASOFI(A song of ice and fire)? the fic's good but it isent about HOTD(High school of the Dead) .

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BigPanda69
BigPanda69Lv2

I don't like the pairing...either make a harem of 2 or change the pairing .....also the story sometimes get confusing cuz of your writing style

9mth
hikigaya4103
hikigaya4103Lv4

Don't really know the plot of HOTD but I will try to read

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KingLettuce
KingLettuceLv2

The story which is about house of the dragons, is decent with not too many issues. The way the pov jumps from chapter to chapter or all in the same chapter can be a little confusing but you can still get the point. The grammar is mostly good with some little issues here or there but you can still understand what was meant to be said. Chapter length is a little short for my tastes but with how often the story is updated it doesn’t really matter much. Overall the story is pretty decent and the progression is paced pretty good. Keep up the good work Author!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

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Armand_Targaryen
Armand_TargaryenLv6

Great novel. thank you! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Kavindu_Ruwanara
Kavindu_RuwanaraLv1

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ well, so far it was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Keep up. Thanks. 💟💟💟💟💟😊😊😊😊😊

9mth
DMan099999
DMan099999Lv4

Only read 1 chapter so far, but it is really good. Please release more and finish the story

9mth
YOUNG_LANY_GIRO
YOUNG_LANY_GIROLv2

Okay guys, I'll say right away that this is just another teenage love fantasy, and not some good HOTD fanfic. And if you need details, then the author is simply focused on Assassin's Creed and because of this, a lot of things look simply ridiculous, there is no POV of the green ones, in principle, when you read from an unknown person, you do it.

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Armand_Targaryen
Armand_TargaryenLv6

Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

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