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2024-07-17 19:04

The idea is great, author's first time writing. He doesn't seem to take criticism as he defends his work rather than trying to understand why we gave it a criticism. Anyways, so far I have only read 3 chapters, the idea is interesting, but execution is not good. Rather than starting with how he reincarnated as Gilgamesh, we start off with him killing what I assume is a stray devil. He bad mouths Sona and Rias, but when he meets Sona he starts saying he likes her no context, the romance is forced, he beat Sona in chess and becomes her fiancé. I am not going to talk about character development as I have only read 3 chapters, I couldn't go for more. Author keeps saying MC is not Gilgamesh but rather have his powers, yet MC keeps calling everyone a mongrel. MC acts arrogant. Definitely Archer Gil if you ask me, he may not be Gilgamesh but he definitely have Archer Gil's personality he shouldn't be simping without context, the only time I saw Archer Gil simping was with Saber's beauty, as someone who wants to have all the treasures in the world he also wanted Saber. But even then, not all iterations of Archer Gil are simps for Saber.

As Gilgamesh in Highschool DxD

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Lord_Hallow
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Decent idea. The issue is there is no character development and the MC feels very one dimensional and fake. He immediately romances sona and becomes her fiancé after complaining about the factions within 2 chapters. Romance makes zero sense with this particular character slash reincarnation. All in all, good general idea, poor execution. Remember, if you’re going to do a Gilgamesh story, and not just a gate of Babylon story, you need to make sure it fits with Gilgamesh as a character and develops that way. You would be better off having him change as the story goes on which would provide better realism and pacing.

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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

AUTHOR THANK YOU FOR THIS NOVLE IT IS FUN TO READ SO DO NOT QUIT,,, CMON HAS ANYONE HERE READ THE NOVEL GILGAMASH IN DXD -I HAVE NOT===IT YOU GUYS HAVE TELL ME ..THIS NOVEL IS MINE FIRST..THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL TO BE FUN IF THE AUTHOR THOSE NOT QUIT BECAUSE DUMB PEOPLE ONLY DUMB PEOPLE HATE FUN.

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Maycon_Henrique_10
Maycon_Henrique_10Lv1

manda uma sua história muito boa errada na boas histórias se você tiver problemas sobre os poderes de julga mexe o rei dos heróis é só pesquisar no YouTube lá de resumo sobre suas habilidades na sua história é muito boa não desista nunca críticas negativa s é só inveja dessas pessoas do seu trabalho 🤔🤔😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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Kingleviathan0316
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I need more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🫡👍🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡

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guarek03
guarek03Lv1

Interesting so far. There aren't many dxd stories with gilgamesh. I can't wait to see how this turns out................................................

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Binge_Reader69
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awesome so far, i have high hopes for this

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AlexPendragon
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BeetleReUs
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This fic ia suffering from Bad grammar, please I am not native to western world but I could manage some basic grammar.

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lonelytier0
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It pretty great so far. I'm looking forward to it.

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