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Rayyer
RayyerLv143mth
2024-10-01 01:02

this clearly just downgrade to ORV the writing in this storyis very jarring dialogue of the characters are so poring and devoid of substance there be paragraphs of just constent yapping that could of been done in like 3-5 sentences but is done in like 10 fill space

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Elsuika
ElsuikaLv4

contrary to your review i don't think it's a DOWNGRADE of orv it may have many similarities in the beginning but starting for chapter 34 , the story gets noticeably better and more unique

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