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FiLL88
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2024-07-09 10:39

The author clearly has a fad! - if he doesn’t write at least once in a chapter that Mac is getting a blo""ob or about breasts of size 32D - the chapter was written in vain... timeskips are rare here - in 200 chapters - a little more than 2 years have passed, so the story should be long (and in each bi""h chapter there is a blo""ob!!)

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Not only that. ML seems to be a pathological liar and a cheat. The way he declares he owns the woman who have been with him, it removes all the realism build in the story.

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