Interesting novel, but full of problems. 1 - Battles last 5 chapters with just the MC reflecting bullets and exchanging punches before getting angry and destroying everyone's hearts telekinetically. (all battles are the same) 2 - 38 chapters of persecution, with the MC running away from soldiers, he kills soldiers, other soldiers find them, he runs away from more soldiers, he kills these soldiers, and the cycle repeats itself infinitely, there is no other script than that. 3- Translation done via gpt chat, calls the same character 4 different names several times without even bothering to check. Good point: 1- Mc even kills the heroes, which I thought was very good.
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Daoist0xFWsd:hola NunuXD vine aquí a comentar que me encantan mucho tus historias sobretodo "Marvel:Game maker system" espero con ansias su actuación me atrapó la historia de Alex, eres un increíble escritor espero y continúes con todos tus obras, espero con ansias todas tus actualizaciones.image