Excellent, I'll say it again, the era of warring clans is the most interesting and underused period of the Ninja World, the best thing is that all the interesting clans are still strong, numerous and alive. Beyond the very good theme, this story is well-constructed and believable, it's much more in-depth and extensive than what we know of the lore, which increases the believability of the story and makes for much more gripping reading. Translator, please increase the speed of translation, and don't be like all those Western translators who remove elements of the original story because they don't agree with the original author, it's unfair and stupid.

decent, but the translator or author needs to kink out some grammatical issues. for instance, the most obvious mistake was when the shinobi were attacking they would yell "go dead" as if to say "Die!" to their enemy, a small but obvious mistake that breaks immersion. other than that, its pretty good.

its goods, plus its warring state fic with a mc that aint uchiha or senju. also the translation is good except with a few pharses or sentences that are translated weirdly.

to make it short... i lost interest because of the faulty translation of the different techniques and bloodlines (mudun, katon, hyaton, fuckon, shiton), well, it's kinda irritating, what's the use of the translator? and also the update instability is irritating, i would forget the story before the next update and feel lost while reading the new chapter(s)💩

The premise was good, but the story quickly took a downhill turn. Many things were not properly planned after the extermination crisis ended. The story did not take any interesting direction. The system is useless as here the system is a choice-based system, but the author simply uses the system whenever he feels like it. Until chapter 70, the system was used only twice, and there were lot instances where system should have been used and there is a lack of depth in fights, dialogues, or even plots. The MC character is also the irritating type – Chinese MCs who will tremble at the thought of killing at first, then will do genocide often, then will do monologues about life and why he did this and a few Chinese poems will be added. Here, when he does something good or bad, or even stupid, the author seems to be trying to justify it. The translator is working hard, I'm sure he removed a lot, but it's still not enough. Plus, if the translator translates the Kekkei genkai, to their English names, it will be useful. If you guys are bored, read it until you feel like stopping.

In the name of the almighty, please do a mass release. I check this story every 6 hours to see if there's an update, I'm going to die, please, please, please

the premise was there but the execution n the writing killed it

This is truly a well written fanfic. Nice job author

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this is the most fantastic fanfiction i've read in a long time. If anyone is wondering if this story is good or bad due to it being a translation, than, worry not; because, this story is the best.