Author's 2nd review after 100 chapters 1. WRITING QUALITY - The first 40 or so chapters contain some dialogue inconsistencies, and in a few places, I was unable to fully express what I truly wanted to say. So please bear with it as it does get better in the later chapters. And I'll slowly edit few such part, so please do "paragraph comments" to let me know. 2. STORY DEVELOPMENT - So far, there are only Seggs parts with little bit story. However, the story is still developing, so it is too early to make any judge. 3. CHARACTER DESIGN - Most I took ideas from adult industry. So I guess it's quite good. 4. WORLD BACKGROUND - It'll be a huge spoiler to reveal that so soon. So let it unfolds step by step. THANKS FOR READING. 🙌
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