The world building is fine. Writing has some flaws. It's not to the point of being hard to understand, but almost every chapter there will be two or three grammar errors or incomplete phrases.Overall, i dont think it matters. The real problem of this ff is the story and the mc. The story is very slow and boring. Barely anything happens. It's chapter 90, and the mc is still 7 years old. Furthermore, this is much closer to a slice of life than an action novel. The mc has one of the most boring personalities a protagonist could have. He is more of a spectator that will occasionally change one thing or two and then watch it develop. It's certainly a smart choice if you are reincarnated, but also a VERY boring one for us readers to read. Throughout these 100 chapters, he had one real fight and no life and death moments. There was one thing that I think the author was creative, and that was to explore the potential of the byakugan. Many authors just ignore it and then focus on their mcs awakening tenseigan as soon as possible.
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