It's really great, it's updated every day and the direction the story is developing and the main character is really good but can't you give Furina a reason for her loyalty,Did he see Furina as a release from his father's cruelty, or Or does Tempest think this is the right thing to do?Maybe he is loyal to Furina because she saved him when he was about to die But this is impossible because even before he was injured he had loyalty to Furina. even if he rebelled to save his sister and mother and restore his clan to its former glory, he was also thinking of Furina and worried that she wouldn't forgive him, it was a bit unreasonable for him to show such loyalty to someone he had only seen once in his life.
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LIKEEverything Tempest's does is the opposite to his Father, Tempest wants to restore his House's legacy and serving the Hydro Archon is the most important part of it, when Furina saved Tempest, his loyalty towards her increased, he originally planned to start his uprising at the name day of Mengsk, potentially risking her life in the process, but because she saved Tempest, he got rid of it,
Got it, I'm looking forward to the next episode, thank you for your efforts.
Dummydumdum1:Everything Tempest's does is the opposite to his Father, Tempest wants to restore his House's legacy and serving the Hydro Archon is the most important part of it, when Furina saved Tempest, his loyalty towards her increased, he originally planned to start his uprising at the name day of Mengsk, potentially risking her life in the process, but because she saved Tempest, he got rid of it,