Good stuff especially because all the chapters that were previously not very good are now edited to perfection pretty much In fact I don’t remember reading any major(or minor) mistakes in the story after the edits and a thing that i liked is the consistency that this story had because I really hate when a story gets the ages of the characters or places wrong and this one didn’t have this problem at all so the attention to detail is much appreciated One of the better got stories I’ve read in a while Keep going author
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