With each chapter you'll see IQ level goes down, rather than any good SI stories, in this one you'll only see heroic pawn mc. and MFL is alicent. Mc is also almost mirror of alicent, pawn in the game, yes man

the name of this story should be "the clown prince "

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Not worth the time. When you put too much drama and cliche romance it's become unreadable. Mc thinks he is smart but a guy with few paragraph can mess him. Not to mention he is showing symptoms of simp

Dude all of your fanfic have one big problem with them All the MC have this one big "Hero Complex" It will be a shame if this turns out that way too.

I don't even have to read the first chapter to automatically know this will be a great fic . Drkest just doesn't miss

For anyone interested reading this Fic. I'll make things easy for you. Go read chapters 29, 30 and 50. If you aren't ok with these chapters then its better to stop but if you can, then you are good to go.

I have already realized that this is not for me, the initial idea of ​​the work is good but over time things get mixed up too much and it is noticeable that you are trying to give a work different from the others but I do not like the development that the story takes. Even so, I thank you for publishing your work.

I personally like the way he writes and the flow of the story. Its pretty good up until the scene between Daemon and Alicent. Now for a genuine questiont; why do people like Alicent? I don't get it at all. She literally has nothing to offer at all, but I always see SI stories choose her as the FML.

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