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DaoistXlSNQT
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2024-07-15 23:57

it would of been a good fic if it wasn't for so many bad spelling and how the story is need a good amount of work

The Walking Dead: reborn as Carl

DaoistCjmElH
3.4
264 Chs

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RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

it's probably a translation.

4mth
Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

and yet you still give them three stars should have been one star on the piss poor job he did on the translation

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But
ButLv14

It’s good only for the fact that this is based off my favorite show. Other than that this is shit, T-boy for Tdog, Moore for Merle and the Moore brothers instead of the Dixon brothers. Like I’m dead serious Derle Dixon name in this is Moore Moore.

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immortalbook
immortalbookLv13

the amount of misspellings is crazy.....

7mth
Tuupkagtroth
TuupkagtrothLv4

couldn't get past the first chapter. Li Mo, MCs name is repeated in every paragraph at least once. TWD characters aren't even correct. Shane is Sean. Merle is Moore/Maul. Dale or Daryl is Dell. Grammar is horrendous. The original story maybe is not bad, but this translation is fucking trash. Translator doesn't even make an effort, just probably told AI to translate it to English, copy paste here and uploaded it. If you don't care about the grammar, at least make enough effort to correct the names.

1mth
Troy34
Troy34Lv1

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book

9mth
Cramon_autor
Cramon_autorLv11

Eine der wenigen aber beste Fanfiktion von The walking dead jeden Tag warte ich auf ein neues Update. Wow eine Mega Story ein echt und logisch denkender MC und eine gute nicht zu schnell gehende Story bitte mehr🤗. One of the few but best fan fiction of The Walking Dead every day I wait for a new update. Wow a mega story a real and logical thinking MC and a good story that doesn't go too fast please more🤗.

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empire1
empire1Lv14

this is a good story, yes the editing could use some work but the translation quality is ok. Trying to be constructive. ## One easy thing that would massively improve the reading experience is getting the names right, I mean Merle and Shane are 2 of the most mentioned characters and I don't think there names have been correct once so far, its really takes me out of the immersive experience

8mth
DaoistX4em3e
DaoistX4em3eLv1

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DaoistvqPSsT
DaoistvqPSsTLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Cramon_autor
Cramon_autorLv11

One of the few but best fan fiction of The Walking Dead every day I wait for a new update. Wow a mega story a real and logical thinking MC and a good story that doesn't go too fast please more🤗.

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