Only on chapter 4 but wanted to leave a review with my thoughts for the author or any potential readers on a few thing so first of all I don't think AI is being used to write this as in AI isn't actively writing or changing the authors writings I believe the reason for this mistake is at the start of every chapter so far the author sets the scene with a description of the surroundings(which has been the jedi temple each time again only on ch4) there are no other tells like clunky writing weird descriptions pronouns being randomly switched ect the writing quality e.g spelling and grammar punctuation is really good so far and so far the character building is good if you where aiming to make him seem the type to think alot while being quite impulsive he seems convinced almost immediately he was brought by a higher power to save the galaxy despite no hints to this which is weird but other than that I would recommend anyone give it a go will update my review as necessary
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