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2024-07-30 04:14

translation: Perfect as of chapter 32 story development: very good so far, the chapters each some hold significance and don't feel like the usual Chinese novel word count fluff chapters. character design: Exellent, they feel full and each with their own personality instead of the usual Chinese one dimension side pieces that usually follow in these types of novels. update stability: nothing to say, some auther is diligently slaving away for our daily enjoyment world background: great but not original. might as well have put a disclaimer saying I copied my power system and general world level from lord of mysteries.

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Mapsu
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I agree on all points. I even misread Karl as Klein once [img=Out of it]

DaoLehao
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Thanks for those notes. Really couldn't bear to read about transmigrator Bottle-MC forth-hand jin. And what about coping LoTM core? For real? So bluntly harassing top novel on the platform and the net aglobe and yet not a single word in synopsis or chapter zero about that?

ahmedIprahim
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هل يمكنك أن تقول لي اسم الموقع الذي قرأت فيه هذه الفصول

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