Cozy loving couple story. But regrettably - no lemons😞😞😞😞😢

i have just reading and this one looks quite promising just keep updating author ,dont drop this

Great story up until the mid 200s. It's almost like the author mixed up their book notes and ended up blending two different stories. However I truly enjoyed the story up until that point.

good novel the system any person wants to have in real life ....well, good setting

just keep updating faster .

This book grabbed my attention from the first paragraph and it's becoming more interesting with each subsequent page. The grammar, spelling and vocabulary are better than most books on this platform, and the storyline is well developed. I'm already hooked, although I've never really been into love stories. Congratulations author. You've just earned a new fan.

TL;DR: Inconsistent story, don't recommend. Wish I could give it a better rating but it's impossible currently. This work needs some serious editing and proofreading. Every chapter there are numerous problems from the more common ones in here like using wrong pronouns and wrong names. And more commonly in the last chapters I read it just keeps on forgetting the daughter and saying they only have two sons/babies every time. And the story consistency is getting worse and worse, the main antagonist(up to where I read) Han Xuemei, the FL cousin, just got orphaned and adopted by the FL's dad out of nowhere when her parents are still alive in their hometown.

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Im only at chapter 7 rn but i rate this book 5/5 max amount i can give because sometimes we need book like this to heal our heart of this dark world..Thank you so much author

Trash mtl. As always the translation isn't good enough. The characters are bland and terribly written. Also the plot is repetitive and boring af. Author had to add cultivation bullshit in the ordinary slice of life action to keep the story floating. But yeah its terrible, no unique ideas [img=faceslap]