The draw for me was the family aspect. I loved reading about the MC and his daughter. She was so adorable and a breath of fresh air. Knowing her bio mom wanted nothing to do with her bc she wanted to pursue an entertainment career, she really cherished Chen Yu. Father and daughter were just too adorable 🥰. Speaking of the bio mom, don’t get me started on her. Ugh, why can’t she just jump off the nearest bridge along with her mother 😒 The romance could use a lot of work bc the mc and the teacher seemed more like friends than romantic partners. I won’t say lovers bc even after they got the marriage license, the mc didn’t make a move on her. As the novel progressed, we see less and less of family and more about business. He’s entering cooking and survival competitions, race car races, becoming a doctor, etc. The heart of the story is supposed to be about family and sadly, this novel loses that, and with it the charm that drew me into the story. Good luck on your future writing endeavors ✌🏾
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