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Error_007Lv46mth
2024-06-26 03:07

What's with this obsession with Nami? Are there no other navigators in this one-piece world apart from her? You build a character who seems to care for Luffy, then you go ahead and take one of the most precious crew members from him. I don't get it. Is it that hard to build a character from scratch? Then why don't you just get Laffitte?

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Shape_Matters
Shape_MattersLv14

Well, Luffy will win no matter what. Just cause he doesn’t meet certain people, the world doesn’t stop, everything will fix itself.

CaioBR
CaioBRLv2

I also find this completely disheartening

Devil_Gamer_0071
Devil_Gamer_0071Lv2

Please name all the navigators you know that can be recruited in west blue in Ace's generation. Otherwise it seems like you prefer lafite over nami. Also this is a SI fanfic. Here SI is ace , so luffy should n't matter ryt. You need to understand that this is not One Piece cannon You want the OG , read the OG. Not a fanfic.

ibxx_j1011
ibxx_j1011Lv14

shut the hell up.

Devil_Gamer_0071:Please name all the navigators you know that can be recruited in west blue in Ace's generation. Otherwise it seems like you prefer lafite over nami. Also this is a SI fanfic. Here SI is ace , so luffy should n't matter ryt. You need to understand that this is not One Piece cannon You want the OG , read the OG. Not a fanfic.
Emibm2468
Emibm2468Lv4

The point of reading fanfics is that it is a different story in the same world. there is no point in reading a fanfic in which the MC does the same thing as the protagonist. It is boring swing the same character arc and character development happen just being slightly different it makes it boring. Also the “if you don’t like it then don’t read” or similar (like you did) is incredibly arrogant, self centered and childish.

Devil_Gamer_0071:Please name all the navigators you know that can be recruited in west blue in Ace's generation. Otherwise it seems like you prefer lafite over nami. Also this is a SI fanfic. Here SI is ace , so luffy should n't matter ryt. You need to understand that this is not One Piece cannon You want the OG , read the OG. Not a fanfic.
Onigami
OnigamiLv5

Can I answer this with a question? If you were reincarnated in One Piece, wouldn't you attract the girls there? It's better to be surrounded by beautiful women than by men. If you were reborn, that is. OP

ye3pz
ye3pzLv4

If surrounding yourself with women is one of the most important parts of being reincarnated in one piece than the story might as well be highschool dxd.

Onigami:Can I answer this with a question? If you were reincarnated in One Piece, wouldn't you attract the girls there? It's better to be surrounded by beautiful women than by men. If you were reborn, that is. OP
Sovannra_Seang
Sovannra_SeangLv11

bruh other pirates seem to be doing fine without NAMI bro just create an oc or sth

Devil_Gamer_0071:Please name all the navigators you know that can be recruited in west blue in Ace's generation. Otherwise it seems like you prefer lafite over nami. Also this is a SI fanfic. Here SI is ace , so luffy should n't matter ryt. You need to understand that this is not One Piece cannon You want the OG , read the OG. Not a fanfic.
LuciasAzrael
LuciasAzraelLv4

he thinks he's hard 😂😂😂😂😂

ibxx_j1011:shut the hell up.
AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

Enserio de todas las quejas que pensé que me podría encontrar esta es la más inútil que vi en mí vida, sinceramente me alegro que sea Nami porque sinceramente en el momento que empieza un fanfic para mí el canon es basura cualquier fanfic que siga al pie de la letra el canon debería borrarse. Para que hacer un fanfic si la única basura que cambias es el nuevo personaje?? Para eso lee el manga o mira el anime

AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

Que tipo más repugnante sos enserio un OC ?? Eso es basura (solo quiero aclarar que lo que me da asco es que quieras una basura de OC osea no te estoy insultando a vos, aclaro porque que hay cada uno acá en WebNovel)

Sovannra_Seang:bruh other pirates seem to be doing fine without NAMI bro just create an oc or sth
Error_007
Error_007Lv4

alright mate 👍

AlastorGF:Enserio de todas las quejas que pensé que me podría encontrar esta es la más inútil que vi en mí vida, sinceramente me alegro que sea Nami porque sinceramente en el momento que empieza un fanfic para mí el canon es basura cualquier fanfic que siga al pie de la letra el canon debería borrarse. Para que hacer un fanfic si la única basura que cambias es el nuevo personaje?? Para eso lee el manga o mira el anime
Sovannra_Seang
Sovannra_SeangLv11

AlastorGF:Que tipo más repugnante sos enserio un OC ?? Eso es basura (solo quiero aclarar que lo que me da asco es que quieras una basura de OC osea no te estoy insultando a vos, aclaro porque que hay cada uno acá en WebNovel)
JAYOP
JAYOPLv1

Broo i also don't like how he is obsessed with nami and if you want woman the it's a fan fiction create your own girls and give them backstory if ace didn't help they would be dead in that way you don't change too much cannon and if you want to change canno then let nami fall for mc and she is going join strawhats to go after ace her love

KingKarma_1766
KingKarma_1766Lv4

Laffite is always used i hope it's someone else tbh

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