decirle a los personajes que son ficticios y que no eres de su mundo es una de las cosas menos inteligentes que puedes hacer. drop

the story background is excellent but the mc personality wise is not good at all i mean being in denial for more than hundred years and treating everything as a joke

Gonna toot my own horn… I’m not the greatest writer in the world but I know I can make people laugh and that’s enough for me. It’s a multi-crossover fanfic, it ain’t that deep. If you want to waste some time and laugh a little, give it a read.

Really cool concept, and the grammar and writing style are excellent. That said, things move way too fast, and there is significantly more telling than showing. Everything very conveniently ends up in MCs favor, including finding a ritual that shifts him back and forth between human and basilisk at will a few paragraphs after he woke up as a snake. I had high hopes, but that promptly dashed them.

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honestly , I ain't gonna lie, it was sorta interesting . I mean, I was always looking forward to it but then you had to make him go to highschool for rias??, that just turned me off. especially when he just became a dad and has another child incoming it just felt too forced, rushed and stupid. I'm not trying to badmouth you or anything it's a really nice book, it's just that , I felt that the story went downhill from there...

I haven't read the story yet, but I'm giving it 5 stars because of Jormungandr being the books cover. Though I do wonder, is he Jormungandr, or does he ever become him?

it's great, if you shut down your brain and read it. I can only say the author is just winging it and going with the flow, he writes anything that comes to mind without planning.

The writing quality is great..I like the story but the MC becomes annoying sometimes.He asks Van Helsing and his group to sit and talk but the next second starts chopping hands 😂