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Daoist_shini
Daoist_shiniLv49mth
2024-06-26 11:33

read ahead in mtl...good story particularly did Sasuke and sakura good but the system is just there for word count mc is all over the place..dude revives and goes all orochimaru and pursuit of immortality....okay to read but missing a bit of interactions and slice of life I guess no romance either so far

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Gustoadverso
GustoadversoLv4

what is mtl???

Gustoadverso
GustoadversoLv4

i've seen it on multiple description but i don't get where it comes from

Daoist_shini
Daoist_shiniLv4

machine translation literature.. try google

Gustoadverso:what is mtl???
hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

i agree, system was useless and while mc seems to value it he did very little to advance the main quest which could've qualittatively change his stregnth. it took him months between completing simple quest and most of the story is fight sense padded with alot of uncessary wordcount and very little story development. Author had good idea but no plot to supprt it.

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