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2024-07-26 00:49

The main idea of ​​the story is attractive. The way the plot is handled is very good. But I think this book has one feature that it can make it one of the best books in the world: the mathematics of fiction. The transitions between time periods are legendary. MC is a smart, naughty, and funny boy. Secondary characters and even monsters have their own stories. Almost none of them were overlooked. And obviously the author's general culture and aesthetic sense is very good. There is nothing negative at all, you could say.The author lacks self-confidence and is obsessed with editing.I wish they would skip the editing and release more chapters per week. Still, it deserves 5 stars.

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As of the 50th chapter, the story that started well gets even better.

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Volume 1 has been renewed and completed. Now it's time for volume 2.

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