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mickro
mickroLv144mth
2024-09-27 19:00

I would like to give the story a 0 but I couldn't the first few chapters were so terrible I had to stop reading half the story was missing the MC went from a normal child to a killing god in the same sentence with no explanation on how he got so powerful the story is a translation with inexplicable names added that make no sense. Also the typical translation problem of the wrong gender is already showing up in the first chapter as well as no world building, plot setup just instant power-up that isn't even explained.

Harry Potter: It's just a billion points of dark magic

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Arkage
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Awada eats a big melon! It is Avada Kadvra. Totally agree with you. So bad

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James_Sloan_0157
James_Sloan_0157Lv4

It’s an interesting Idea but it’s clearly not exicuted correctly hard to follow and makes no sense

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Helltul
HelltulLv14

Poor translation, missing half the contents of the chapters. Have seen better MTL's

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imab
imabLv1

sadly its a mtl ........................................................................................................................................

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Breckie_Smith
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Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

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