Right at this moment, I have very few problems with this novel. The writing quality is amazing, very few of any errors appear. The sentence structure and each paragraph are well thought out. Updating stability is great but with longer chapters mean the stability will usually start to slow down. The story development depends on what the reader is expecting. I was kind of hoping for a relatively longer story, maybe a couple of wars or interesting events to happen. But he, the mc, is practically living the perfect life. Schemes are all well and good until absolute power comes into play. I don’t really see any way for the mc to struggle other than morality situations. For example, the faith of the seven I believe hate magic so once they learn he can firebend, he can be a target for their manipulations. They can try to tarnish his image or get the people to hate him or whatever but he could kill the pope and their faith quite easily in a hundred different ways. But the different regions being any type of threat? He has five dragons who will all be bigger than drogon by the time he is older, not to mention the fact that he individually have a massive amount of power which will put him onto or close to the same level as the dragons. I just don’t see much of conflict in the future of this novel. Character design? We haven’t seen much of the mc, it has only been 10 chapters and about half of those chapters he was a baby so it’s hard to judge but he hasn’t done anything that I hate so I would normally give perfect five stars but I’m slightly hesitant because of the authors previous works on FF.net. The mc is still young so romance isn’t a thing but I really pray you do not turn him gay. I am ok with absolutely no romance, that is fine with me. Harems will usually ruin the story, especially in GoT universe so please don’t do that either but turning this into a yaoi will instantly destroy this novel for myself and most likely many others. So please don’t follow your James and Severus stuff. And the world building is good. Writers normally don’t have to do much world building when it’s a fan fiction since we already know but you still world build for those who aren’t familiar to the story so good job. Anyways I’m looking forward to more. I find it may be difficult to make jaw dropping and nerve wrecking scenes in the future since you gave him so much power right at the start but I’m still look forward to it. Good luck
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Thanks for your long review! And yes, you’re mostly right on the plot problems that are basically nonexistent at the moment. I’m actually currently still writing and editing plot progress and character developments on my characters so it might take a while. And don’t worry, this story isn’t going to be Yaoi or a Harem story. It’s going to be a 1 on 1 ending on the sub romance plot. But still, it is going to be a slow progress since at the beginning I didn’t plan on actually finishing this story. I didn’t think people would be interested in it so now that i decided to finish and continue—I’m basically back to my writing and brainstorming board for my plot. Lol 😆
