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Brandini_Brawl
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2024-10-10 04:44

This is the first fanfic I've read, and I loved it!! Thank you for writing, and please don't stop updating 🙏 English is not my first language, but I really enjoy your writing.

Good or bad, does it matter?{HP}

Lucifer09
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Lucifer09
Lucifer09Author

As an author, I am obliged to write a 5 star review (even if it's bad). Now, if you know, I have uploaded this again to generate some reader base again and get more regular with the updates.

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Nightshade9000
Nightshade9000Lv13

It's a great story, original takes on characters, the world and most importantly a thrilling suspense in the background. Although the phrasing and grammar can use some improvements, it's in no way a disability for story comprehension and progress. Ah, yes the updating stability doesn't apply for this instance due to accident and rehabilitation but I hope to read more of this story. Hope you didn't get isekaied Lucifer09.

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Fn6
Fn6Lv1

I was enjoy it tk. ..................... ..................... ..................... ..................... That good between other hp fanfic

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Nightshade9000
Nightshade9000Lv13

One of the best stories that I have ever come across on any web-novel platforms. I know that the 'phrasing' of descriptions and some spellings are somethings that need detailed work and review to make it better presentable to read freely but that is not to say it's incomprehensible (it happens rarely but isn't consequential enough cause to invite critical breakdowns). I have read a LOT* of HP Fan-fics, enough to know that most books are created on the premise of a crazy idea that makes them unique but this whole book that brand of uniqueness and enough to let the author keep cooking. That makes this one my top favourite HP fic right there with Grandpa Universe's arc 1 , perhaps even higher - I would know when I finish re-reading this....

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McTripp
McTrippLv14

Ready for round 3 of releases and happy that the author is still alive and healthy. thanks for this interesting story, I personally loved this so much the first time that I keep coming back and rechecking for it.

5mth
DaoistPHfxL0
DaoistPHfxL0Lv2

Well, it's really good, why are only so few people leaving a review The main thing for the author is to finish and not "merge" the end Good luck [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Ole_Tessmann
Ole_TessmannLv4

The grammar is alright and the story has a very interesting premise, but it just feels so weird reading it. There are passages that just fly right over your head because you have no idea what’s going on. It seems that the author is not a native English speaker and it shows, the way some sentences are built etc. All I can say is that if you overlook the not bad just weird English I assume it can be an interesting read

4mth
Mystic_Topaz
Mystic_TopazLv14

I've really been enjoying this story. The only thing that's been bothering me about it is the grammar and sentence structure. It's been making it difficult to read for the last few chapters, and some of it seems to make no sense to the point that I have to slightly guess what's going on. If you can get past that, then you're good.

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Miu_chan_7272
Miu_chan_7272Lv11

This novel is so good! Could you tell the name of the raw for this fanfic? hearts 💖💖💖💕❤💕❤💕❤💕❤💕💕💕❤💕❤💕💕💕❤💕❤💕❤💕💕❤💕❤💕❤❤💕💕💖💖💖💖💖💖

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sfeezor
sfeezorLv15

Seriously enjoying this way more than I thought I would! At first I just picked it up to see if it was worth wasting time on while waiting for new chapters on my current favorites. This book has quickly become one of those favorites. Grammar could use a proof read, only suggestion for improvement.

1mth
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