I'm not sure what I read, all I know is that this fanfiction only contains lots of MC monologues? or it could also be called a first person point of view, so here the MC explains what happened and what he did, explanations from a third person point of view are almost completely non-existent, and the little dialogue between the characters just makes the characters look like empty shells, and the chance of chance seems too forced, like you haven't found the book until the new student quota rules, it looks like you're too lazy to create a new scenario and just follow the canon event with the MC as the protagonist......I hope the author fixes the part that part, and the update schedule is quite consistent but as I said, conversation is necessary to make the novel fun to read, especially when you see the shocked reactions of other characters seeing the MC's powers....
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thank you for your review. I had realised my mistake in only writing first person POV so it is fixed after a few chapters and other things will be improved too as I continue writing but it will be a slow process so I hope for your patience and support.
