I almost never write reviews i am writing this to spare other poor souls from reading this s*ìt don't be tricked by the first chaps the story is decent same for the plot and translation, but it is mc personality the problem if you don't have a "special" kind of preference avoid this novel like the pest, i have read a few chapters ahead from Current translation around chapter 60 Mc there basically admits to liking being dominated by his girl when i read that i really wanted to punch the ever living s*ìt out of the original author for my wasted time and his Trash preferences.

don't be fooled by a few starting chaps . firstly MC was doing pretty cool at start then MC started to become a dog for xiao Yan. have some self respect for yourself man!. i fully understand that MC doesn't want to conflict with Xiao Yan but at least don't make a loss with him. Be a Man! No one is saying that you have become a lap dog there are tons of opportunities in the original that don't need burning technique. Just stole ancient jade from the Xiao clan and threw it somewhere. No jade, No Inheritance, No Doudi. As Xiao Yan. Use some brain and kill him at right moment simple! once No Doudi then MC can steady grow and become strongman in some time.

Nice story , for most part I like it . And you're much less narrow minded unlike other others on btth fan fic , who tried to make Xiao Yan a bad man and keep on ceasing his oppertunity in the name of justice .

you can have yao chen take him as an in-name disciple who couldn't Inherit his main linage but have help, guidance and teachings of yao chen who will also give him a technique which was traded with for pills in past this technique is heaven level but it is incomplete it's full technique might be di class and you could even have it's origin in great ten thousand realms.

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an enjoyable story with a new and more realistic approach to the btth world where the protagonist doesn't aim for all the women and treasures without considering the consequences . there are parts that could have been translated better but it's improving with time . overall it has been a good read until now👍🏻

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A escrita é excelente, ortografia também. INFELIZMENTE, é outra fanfic clichê de protagonista que vira um alquimista. Tinha tudo para ser uma história incrível, mas infelizmente... o clichê, o velho clichê está tão presente que ler se torna um risco para a alma, capaz de criar um demônio interno.

So far, the progress is good, and neither do you have enmity for Xiao Yan unlike other authors who seems to have some beef with him, portraying him as someone in a bad light in their work (Not that i would hate them for that, also some of those Fanfic are also good, i just don't know why they hate him that's all) I know that he seems a bit too careless and childish an adult inside a childs body, but atleast in every event he comes out he grows more mature (To what he should have been) unlike his careless personality at the start of the story. Also I hope this won't be drop like those good fanfics i have read, because this btth Fanfic is one of the top btth fanfic i have read and compared to others who have system or their own golden finger this one don't have one and will rely on his knowledge of the future and his own efforts.