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Mehran_Mahbob
Mehran_MahbobLv36mth
2024-06-22 03:25

it's edgy, almost too much , mc edgyness injured me

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Wizened
WizenedLv4

Hello mehran, you’ve voiced your concern on this recently released 8 chapter book. Edgy? I was wondering what was edgy as the main character has been kind and understanding to those being rude to him ( considering his standing as the strongest god and his unlimited potential for power ) , Could you tell me specifically what was it that made you dislike and give such a low rating?

Mehran_Mahbob
Mehran_MahbobLv3

mc is a reincarnated human , but he doesn't show any Trace of humanity he completely disregarded his family and before meeting them he decided that they are trash , he don't care about war and beings that affected by it

Wizened:Hello mehran, you’ve voiced your concern on this recently released 8 chapter book. Edgy? I was wondering what was edgy as the main character has been kind and understanding to those being rude to him ( considering his standing as the strongest god and his unlimited potential for power ) , Could you tell me specifically what was it that made you dislike and give such a low rating?
Wizened
WizenedLv4

Well he is now a god so you can’t expect him to be a saint and he understands that they are weaker then him but he isn’t rude unless they are rude to him. I wouldn’t say your wrong but instead of edgy I would say he is very proud and prideful, and he can back it up so it doesn’t really come off as arrogance.

Mehran_Mahbob:mc is a reincarnated human , but he doesn't show any Trace of humanity he completely disregarded his family and before meeting them he decided that they are trash , he don't care about war and beings that affected by it
Kaxharu_Ryuzaki
Kaxharu_RyuzakiLv1

por mi parte creo que todo esa tonteria de que los protagonistas deben ser orgullosos es basura y esta mal, es cansador ver como en la mayoría de los fanfiction lo usan como un equivalente de cuan atractivo es un personaje, creo que no se toman el tiempo suficiente para comprender que lo que hace atractivos a los personajes de series populares no es por ser indiferente, arrogante, terco, tener tatuajes, cicatrices, problemas con el alcohol o fumar, la verdadera razón es el porque estos personajes tienen estos rasgos, he leído muchos fanfic en los que le agregan cicatrices o vicios a los protagonistas sin motivo aparente, lo malo es que lo hacen solo porque algun personajes de anime las tiene, ejemplos de estos es que en los fanfic de one piece siempre le hacen cicatrices por que Luffy las tiene, me enoja porque el protagonista de one piece consiguió sus cicatrices en momentos relevantes de la historia y no solo porque se descuido en un entrenamiento o peleo con algunos piratas debiles.

Hamtaro_
Hamtaro_Lv1

You sound like an AI.

Wizened:Hello mehran, you’ve voiced your concern on this recently released 8 chapter book. Edgy? I was wondering what was edgy as the main character has been kind and understanding to those being rude to him ( considering his standing as the strongest god and his unlimited potential for power ) , Could you tell me specifically what was it that made you dislike and give such a low rating?
Wizened
WizenedLv4

Hello Don, i get that comment a lot. I don’t see it but it’s funny to hear sometimes.

Hamtaro_:You sound like an AI.
Hamtaro_
Hamtaro_Lv1

It's the way you structure your sentences, it's the same thing those corporate chatbots do. Even the emotions feel forced, I still think you're an AI though.

Wizened:Hello Don, i get that comment a lot. I don’t see it but it’s funny to hear sometimes.
Wizened
WizenedLv4

Well Don, I think you have quite a vivid imagination. I am not A.I, I just like writing like this! Have a great day Don.

Hamtaro_:It's the way you structure your sentences, it's the same thing those corporate chatbots do. Even the emotions feel forced, I still think you're an AI though.
Hamtaro_
Hamtaro_Lv1

You 100% are an AI mate.

Wizened:Well Don, I think you have quite a vivid imagination. I am not A.I, I just like writing like this! Have a great day Don.
Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

My chatgbt has more emotion. lol. he is AI

Hamtaro_:You 100% are an AI mate.
King_Of_SpaceTime
King_Of_SpaceTimeLv14

the fact he still hasn't yet responded 😅 but it's too formal, polite and professional to be human while also lacking any emotions behind it at least it's clearly a advanced chat bot who seems to side with humans

Emmanuel_Capricorn:My chatgbt has more emotion. lol. he is AI
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